note: this is part of #bloganuary where each day in the month of January, there is a prompt that we can write on.
Well this will be fun. As I have seen a few others comment, I am also not a poet. I do not really like poetry, I do not understand it. However, improving my craft means taking the risk to explore the uncomfortable. Even if it is awful and just for fun. This is based on a trip Dawn and I took last month to a rural cabin. The photo above is from that day.
Here we go……
A Rain Storms Beautiful Gifts
The heavy rains came down on vacation day three.
Alternate plans for my wife and me.
A rainy day meant just staying put.
Enjoying each others company,
inside, some games, and a book.
Grateful for what would be revealed the next day,
as we traversed muddy paths under skies still grey.
Creeks filled with new drops, ebbing so strong,
I stand silent and listen to their babbling song.
Waterfalls alive, forty feet tall,
We stand at their base, amazed by it all.
Aside from the falls, there is nary a sound.
Just the beautiful remnants of rains that came down.
I gaze at the creeks and enjoy their gentle hum.
In wonder and I ask, where did you come from?
We stop and we look, for one final time.
Taking it all in, her hand in mine.
May y’all be happy, healthy, and safe
t.t.
Tommy!!! You’re a poet!!! I loved that this rhymed and was such a beautiful reflection of you and your wife making the best of a rainy day…and the muddy days aftewards. So touched by this xx
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Thank you Janet, I had a ton of fun with this one.
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GREAT first attempt at poetry – you really made that day come to life!
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